The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5XlVboGVtY
1m17s Do the laugh stop after that line
2m42s Say it a little more playfully
5m12s Smile a little
Overall: I got some laughs but it felt weaker than the previous night.
Performance Critique: February 18b
The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fzxA9QNKHeg
5m35s This line needs a stronger end
7m27s I can add, “that’s also how I like my sex”
Overall: Great set doing the psycho character
Performance Critique: February 18a
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LBTVOwbCSZY
2m11s Try saying “if you don’t uncross your arms” in my normal voice
2m23s Great improvised line
2m41s The “I’m a lefty” should be in the psycho voice
3m07s Cut out “cause”
4m24s Say the father line in the normal voice
5m59s Say it more playfully
Overall: The idea of going in and out of the character works, but I need to think of a smoother way to introduce the voice
Performance Critique: February 17b
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Olnpy0bNK4o
2m04s Cut the dog eating line
3m58s Weak acting like I’m thinking before saying the “I guess” line
5m12s Reorder the words of these two lines
5m57s It should be “kids” not “children” the second time
6m52s Finish the sentence
7m04s Say “good thing I brought mine” a little more playfully
9m18s Try “I’m also a good person” instead of “and I’m…”
10m01s Finish the sentence even if improvising
10m47s Try “must’ve felt” instead of “felt”
13m02s Say “lucky lady” instead of “lucky audience member”
Overall: A little up and down but good set.
Performance Critique: February 17a
A writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w1TiLJNa4Uo
1m52s Cut the dog eating line
5m03s This needs a word other than “nunchucks”
Overall: Average to weak response for a mic
