Hosting the second half of an open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=szv8TNPOi8Y
1m22s This new one seems to be a keeper
1m39s Weird hand motion
3m43s Nice end on a new joke
4m01s No need for the “laughing too hard at that” comment
4m13s Say “air quotes” not “quotes”
Overall: Ok for a mic. I did some older bits to setup new bits better.
Doing a check spot 2 hours into a show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NknkD1guG-c
1m25s Sound a little more playful when saying “cause I hate your hair”
3m10s Sound a little angrier
5m10s Cut the uncle line or put it after the “everyone’s been” line
5m33s I gotta learn how to handle actual responses here better
Overall: Average for a check spot, some laughs, but not great
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HYmGKZc5Htg
0m35s Try to keep my hands above my elbows for the whole set instead of dropping them to my sides at almost every punch line
2m33s No need for that many F-bombs in that short of a time, pick one place
4m05s Reword to “I hate the suburbs because”
5m03s At least it’s a good save line
5m11s Don’t pause there
5m45s More emphasis on the word “every”
Overall: Weak response even for a mic, working on newer stuff
The Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lgCvRv_q-ts
0m39s Sound happier about this
0m54s Make mouth talk motions with my hands
1m35s Cut “in front of everything else”
2m02s Cut “On your way out”
3m38s Think about a different delivery for this joke, maybe happier
4m11s Don’t pause here, pause after “watching them take their birth control”
Overall: Weak response even for a mic, working on mostly newer stuff
Doing a check spot on the 10pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6UFHrPO67c
1m10s I got the shoes and hair lines backwards
3m19s Point at “neuro divorce” not earlier in the line
Overall: Good for a check spot
