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Performance Critique: June 21a

Opening for an improv group

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HmJERRWOfPk

1m10s Hit the line harder

4m14s Turn to the side for this line, make it more of an aside

5m26s Cut the word “so” at the start, it’ll seem more random

Overall: Eh, weak but steady laughs.

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