Category: Comedy

Hosting my Queens show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tGMtGt8KuTM

0m50s Awkward but necessary to get it to stop

1m36s Good call, go into it further

2m24s More emphasis on “MY”

3m22s Make a downhill motion with my hand on “flushed down the toilet”

4m22s Hit the “I’m not in an office as an animator” harder you can’t animate outside

5m05s Add “so you will be working in IT”

7m11s Don’t lean back on a punch line

8m11s Scan my eyes from side to side more

9m34s Change “catch” to “watch”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOKeGQQ76w8

2m52s Cut or change these last two lines

3m18s It’s supposed to be “easy to service”

Overall: Good job only doing one joke in the first five minutes of hosting. My energy level could still be a little higher but I did a better job of talking to the crowd.

The 8PM Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VnATVFTzPgw

0m22s Change my voice for that act out

0m36s It doesn’t make sense to say “kid” and then have him use my name

1m08s It was supposed to be “a soft degree”

2m36s Have a funnier call out

3m27s Try “til you throw a number, or a dollar”

5m24s Say it’s like “dancing waterfalls” or “jumping waterfalls”

5m51s Say my line of “I’m a stand up comic, not a stand up guy” when that joke doesn’t land

Overall: Average and some wording needs to be adjusted.

The 8PM show a light crowd of about 20 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m_fkzOSqSSg

0m28s Make the premise clearer

0m56s Add the words “like me” after philosophy major

1m18s Ask “have you been like that for everyone? I thought I was special”

5m58s Don’t stutter in the middle of a punch line

7m22s I got a laugh, so the line didn’t make sense

Overall: Great set especially since it was a small crowd

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3BdQYUTWXm8

1m40s I hadn’t been on stage for two days, so I decided to do my “A” jokes just to warm up

3m32s Call them out on homophobia

Overall: Decent for a mic

Hosting my Queens show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-u3KY1a_np0

0m34s Go into the “I’m not sure what my tattoo means” for longer

1m15s Mimic her pronunciation and see if she says everything in that accent or just her name

1m58s Try changing this to “I’m hitting MY goal 100% of the time”

4m22s I haven’t asked the audience any questions yet

7m05s I should’ve started with addressing the environment

7m58s Do different poses

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jc6Lkmpw0vc

1m14s I notice I’m not higher energy than I usually am, and I need to be when hosting

2m18s Doing time between comics

3m02s Cut the clip to wall line

4m00s All my improvised lines are getting bigger laughs than the material, so I should improvise more, especially when hosting

6m18s Great call back

8m15s Nice try getting the couple to stop sucking face

8m56s Rework the first two lines of the shoes joke

Overall: Not great but not terrible. I need to go way higher in my energy and delivery when hosting.