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Performance Critique: August 3

Doing a regular spot at my show in Queens

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Iy6VVnw9PH4

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Iy6VVnw9PH4

0m26s Say “Hey girls” before that line

1m07s Hold the “what the fuck look” for longer

5m17s Remove word “your”

5m54s Drop down lower on the fake donkey

7m11s Do a stronger act out

7m51s Good job going along with the word stumble

8m10s Get rid of the Zeus inc tag

8m49s Good call back

9m33s Great crowd work, as usual good improvised crowd work gets bigger laughs than any material

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1Og1wOF5Is

3m14s Sell the “what the hell” look harder

5m28s No need for “that’s bullshit”

Overall: Respectable set, the crowd work went over really well, I just gotta figure out how to do that consistently.

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