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Performance Critique: December 11c

The Sunday Writer’s Mic

httpv://youtu.be/OSyXjpyW7x4

3m04s Fix or reword the multiple carriers part

3m39s Don’t pause between kiss and on the mouth

3m50s Or just cut this whole part

Overall: Decent for a mic but the lines I’ve changed still need work

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