Going first on a 4:30pm show
httpv://youtu.be/pbtN1Ka47k4
0m28s Don’t say “good start”
1m28s Make “maybe” sound more threatening
2m04s Slow down the plane line
2m39s Call out the “ooh” as that line doesn’t deserve it
4m15s Should’ve done a save line before going into a new bit
Overall: Started out ok-ish then got weaker. Go to save lines sooner and don’t hold back from doing actual crowd work even if it’s a short set.