Towards the end of an 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/AromsSvtA50
1m30s Move eyes side to side slower
5m03s Instead of “this vicious cycle” say “MY vicious cycle”
5m20s Remember to the put mic stand back in to do a better hula hoop
6m42s Fifth and sixth year should be on the same hand
6m58s No need to point this out when I get a good laugh
8m28s Learn to pause after “sometimes” if a big laugh comes
8m38s Don’t stutter on the line
9m20s Nice improvised line
Overall: Good set.