A 10pm show (with the camera/audio far away)

1m30s Good misinterpretation on her “excuse me”

1m51s Milk the circle motion for longer if it’s getting laughs

3m57s State that it’s called a contract year

5m03s I accidentally did this bit instead of the cell phones like marriages bit, but it actually helps break up the anti-marriage material

6m04s Have the mic in the stand before doing the one liner

Overall: Solid short set, although you can’t tell from this audio version

Closing the 8pm show

2m43s Pointed at a guy that was way too old to be playing Halo

5m45s Funny how they called me nerdy before I got to it

7m07s Doing this joke without doing mom act outs first is weird

7m43s Make kissing sounds

Overall: Eh. I did my smarter material on purpose and it got laughs but not huge laughs.

Late night at a music mic

2m59s Instead of “it’s gonna get sadder” could’ve gone “no, it’s okay because I was actually happy about it…”

3m32s Make one of the voices masculine

4m53s Don’t put hand over face

6m52s Good that I’m trying to write on stage, even if it’s not funny

8m05s Add “I’m like” first

Overall: Mediocre set but I did a good job rolling with the punches and trying to write on stage.

Going up first

1m15s Lean in harder with the mic stand

1m20s Pause longer after “I don’t pander”

5m10s Tighten this and pick one specific person for the batteries line

5m34s Do better crowd work if asking a question

Overall: Mediocre. The first two minutes went fine then I spent 4 minutes talking about why marriages are stupid. Maybe I shouldn’t start with that material two minutes into a set.

Doing a check spot on the 10pm

2m02s Make the circle motion slower and more deliberately

Overall: The two people who were listening laughed at most of the punch lines, everyone else ignored me more or less quietly while paying their checks.