Performance Critique: June 23b

Late night music and comedy for a few people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZ1qBuL5Ejc

2m59s Talking less loud actually sometimes works

7m39s Have a better response next time

9m47s Say “yeah” a little more convincingly

Overall: The jokes hit so so, but I did a good job of rolling with the interruptions/conversation and not getting thrown

Performance Critique: June 23a

An 8pm bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3iRLtxVSDoQ

1m43s Turn to a different direction for “I love that he’s not disputing it”

2m59s Point it out to the rest of the crowd, not to the person

4m51s Try just moving the eyes, without moving the head

5m09s Smile bigger

6m08s Get rid of the “dah-dah-dah-dah”

7m35s Nice improvised little bit

Overall: Good set, newer mom bits worked decently well

Performance Critique: June 21a

Opening for an improv group

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HmJERRWOfPk

1m10s Hit the line harder

4m14s Turn to the side for this line, make it more of an aside

5m26s Cut the word “so” at the start, it’ll seem more random

Overall: Eh, weak but steady laughs.

Performance Critique: June 20

Going last 2.5+ hour into a show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YjRQsuBm7s4

0m46s Respond better with something like “I love that you don’t dispute it”

4m01s Don’t pause mid sentence

4m17s Move my eyes side to side, not my head

4m44s Go straight to “I just got back from” without restating what he said

6m33s Push the mic forward on the punch line

7m01s First say, “she’s cute, good job sir.”

Overall: Weak steady-ish laughs. Connect better at the start.

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