Going up about 3 hours into the show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBsu1P6ogZc
1m50s Don’t go up on “alcoholic”
4m25s A save line should be used by now
4m39s Really should’ve done this type of crowd work earlier
Overall: Weak set. When going up this late, do more crowd work to start.
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HWNVkuXO1ak
1m50s Instead of “talk about her” say “that I do impressions of her”
3m23s Push the DVD harder
4m43s Work on this part of the joke, there’s something here
5m52s Do this line way earlier, before the alimony stuff
6m18s Try to find a joke to finish that premise
Overall: Standard mediocre mic response. Working on newer stuff.
Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=drmVXNjp0cQ
0m48s Point if leaning forward like that
1m10s Lean forward on this one if I lean forward on the first one
5m35s Cut the “sounds like you have the same degree” line
6m01s Time the pointing to coincide with “neuro divorce”
Overall: Ok for checks.
Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPTroprNOPg
0m42s Do a mom bit before saying she hates the impression of her
2m33s Pause after “so you’re out of the hospital”
3m58s Cut or rework the morally bankrupt hero thing
Overall: Working out newer stuff. Mediocre mic response.
Doing a longer set on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RFesx5v3f3A
4m58s Deliver “god I hope this works” in a more worried manner
5m20s The idea is there, the wording is terrible
6m01s Delivery sounded forced on that line
6m26s Tilt my head up higher
8m02s Hold my leg on the hammy line
9m29s Don’t screw up the line
9m39s Say two minutes not twenty seconds
10m57s Don’t address the polysci majors thing unless it’s a big laugh
12m14s Really funny improvised play off of what happened in the room
15m09s Be more direct “you’re my favorite audience member” instead of “he’s my number one fan”
15m46s Mess with him for that weird non answer
16m20s Lean forward on “get tested”
Overall: Consistent small laughs but not enough huge laughs.
