Tag: Critiques

Late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VNmgbswKDwM

1m18s Good response

3m22s Nice when new parts hit hard

4m50s I could’ve played off his “I’ll probably get murdered” statement a lot harder

5m27s Make it 24 hours, not 48

6m40s That’s my favorite move of all time, knocking on wood after “I didn’t grow up in jersey”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2UyfZg8DW1k

0m38s Handling the interruptions well although they’re getting more annoying

2m43s Instead of married say wife

3m20s It’s stupid but funny

4m51s That’s the best that line has worked to date

5m04s Say drapes instead of curtains

Overall: Great set, real good response for the newer stuff

Hosting the second half of a mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KVuxwta_dtQ

0m56s Restate that it was last year

4m18s Don’t stumble

4m57s Reword that into one coherent sentence

5m15s Doing more time towards the end

6m14s Find a better intro into that

6m58s Nice tag on the save line

Overall: Ok for a mic

A 10pm show for ten people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v5VjAvxglaY

2m11s Say “I also come from a broken home” instead of “my family is also broken”

Overall: Good fun set for a small audience, and I did a brand new joke which got an ok response but still needs work

Going last on an 8:30 show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nqvvkGXe7o

0m49s Good addition, sentence can be smoother though

2m29s Smile more while saying this

3m08s Nice improvising on my own weird comment

Overall: Good set, did newer stuff and it went fairly well.

An open mic with some live audience

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SICyxzuQR6k

2m37s Think of a different delivery to get laughs after each complaint

2m59s Make a better boob motion

3m05s More emphasis on “prepay”

6m23s Reword to “I guess everyone in the room” instead of “I just learned”

Overall: Good for a mic