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Performance Critique: September 13a

An open mic with some live audience

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SICyxzuQR6k

2m37s Think of a different delivery to get laughs after each complaint

2m59s Make a better boob motion

3m05s More emphasis on “prepay”

6m23s Reword to “I guess everyone in the room” instead of “I just learned”

Overall: Good for a mic

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