The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/xTuxk-vs4nU
1m48s Could’ve gone into actual crowd work there
5m02s Bat eyelids will doing the kissy face
5m24s I could add “I was more optimistic, I gave it five years”
7m18s I could’ve made fun of the “buffet” portion of that answer
11m44s Watch that it doesn’t shake so much it messes up the mic
Overall: Good set.
A late night music and comedy mic
httpv://youtu.be/uDHB5FPRo1Y
1m48s If the razor blades gets a reaction I should say “I see some of you have been there…”
2m54s Cut “free clinic chairs”
3m01s Say the questions were standard
3m24s Try “licensed physician” to change up from “doctor”
4m53s It should be “latex dick” instead of “latex condoms”
6m07s Change it to a girl’s voice
6m18s Cut “not hooking up with her again”
7m48s Cut the last thirty seconds
10m09s Say “internet connection” happier
Overall: Decent for working out a new bit at 1am. It needs to get a lot tighter though.
Doing a check spot
httpv://youtu.be/LOoe_PnUrLw
2m46s Try pausing between “vicious cycle” and “of sadness”
3m34s Should try a save line by now
5m55s Not good when the save lines miss
Overall: Pretty bad even for a check spot. I should know to abandon the material and engage the crowd to increase the odds they start paying attention.
A show with 12 or so audience members
httpv://youtu.be/_vXckC4jki0
6m35s “Palestinian” statehood seems to be getting as little response as “two state solution” try another rewrite or cut it
7m13s It should be “black Friday” not “good Friday”
Overall: Weak set. Should’ve tried more crowd work.
The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/umPVeVxKCCc
2m18s More emphasis on “hate”
3m43s Clearer that my dad’s talking
4m34s Dad saying it doesn’t fully make sense
7m19s Could’ve worded this smoother
7m31s Try pausing for half a second after “let’s”
Overall: Okay set but nothing great. The divorce joke needs a lot of rewriting.
