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Performance Critique: April 7

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/umPVeVxKCCc

2m18s More emphasis on “hate”

3m43s Clearer that my dad’s talking

4m34s Dad saying it doesn’t fully make sense

7m19s Could’ve worded this smoother

7m31s Try pausing for half a second after “let’s”

Overall: Okay set but nothing great. The divorce joke needs a lot of rewriting.

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