The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BO7IPTx3KZk
1m01s Change the intonation on the line, emphasize “I”
1m44s I bailed on a bunch of the bit in the middle, remember the whole thing
2m36s Good job addressing the talking
3m02s If I’m not opening with this, I should notice someone eating food to be reminded of this
6m06s No need for “you” before “dick”
9m00s Give them another half second before doing the next bit
10m13s Good job addressing it
Overall: This set seemed much better on video than it felt in person.
Dude! I am really impressed that you analyze your performances this way – and in public!