The Sunday Writer’s Mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UkaA1JXHQS8
0m14s Sound more indignant about this
0m21s Make it more obvious that I’m talking to a waiter
1m34s No need to explain it
1m49s The sentence should be “we went to her place without getting food first”
2m49s It should be “that reads SIGNS”
4m22s This joke needs a better ending, but the premise has potential
Overall: I tried out four minutes of brand new, half written jokes, and three of them have potential (million point bonus, train conductor fine, and Israeli security questions). I need to rewrite them a few times and keep trying them.
