Performance Critique: November 20

Going first on the 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hnLm6xEh42s

1m39s It sounds like I was going through puberty during the mom act out cause I’m a little sick

3m49s Scrunch the face first, then put the hand on the hip, then go down in the stance

4m12s I need a better punchline here

4m55s Good job implementing an improvised lined from last night into the joke tonight

7m37s Pause after “thanks for the tip”

Overall: Solid set for going first on a show. I did only “A” jokes but I had a couple of new lines in them and the two new lines hit hard.

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