Performance Critique: November 28b

This is the 1030 show for 8 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z1qF_6kxw2Q

0m43s Pause after “listed as in a relationship”

1m30s Cut the “fooood” joke

2m30s Since the first 1.5 minutes of my Russian family joke didn’t work, I skipped out on the rest

4m07s It should be “why haven’t we tried this yet?” not “I tried this yet?”

4m28s Wow they are slow

5m12s Once again, my crowd work gets a bigger laugh than my material

6m33s No need to call back to a joke that barely worked

Overall: I only got two solid laughs: The Jdate joke (which I had to pause extra long for) and a improvised bit. Going slower might’ve helped.

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