Performance Critique: November 22

This is at The Ice House Main Stage for an audience of around 80

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hur5z-EKSxc

0m50s I didn’t scrunch my eyebrows like usual, that would’ve gotten an even bigger response

1m08s Say “yes” in a question format, like “yes?”

1m11s Stumbled on a word there, no need for “have”

1m59s Not sure why I said “when I” twice

2m19s I find I need to wait a couple of seconds for “they’re not all drunks” to hit

2m55s Second night in a row that happened, I was ready for it this time

3m59s I thought “that failed” would get a laugh, might as well cut the line

4m22s No need for “make wrong choice line”

5m02s This is the best this joke has ever worked

5m12s I thought medicare would hit stronger, a few more trials and I will remove it

5m57s Maybe try “I want to change that” instead of “it needs to change”

6m25s The tubes joke has stopped working, and I can’t figure out why, it used to be one of my best jokes… I’ll try rewriting it a few times, but it’s looking like it might need to be retired

6m44s At least jdate still works

7m13s This could be a good time do something like “got your nose” or other facepainting / clown thing

7m43s Could’ve ended stronger

Overall: This was a great set and it’s interesting to me how all my newer material works much better than my older (and more tested material). The tubes joke either needs to be redone or completely retired because it’s not working. Also, some of my newer jokes are one line too long, or in need of a better last line.