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Performance Critique: November 19b

This is show at a bar for an audience of 7

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aWw6zV9jvTY

1m01s When my opening one minute joke doesn’t hit at all, there’s no point in going straight into more material, I might as well address the situation

1m32s No need for the line after “foooood”

2m27s I did the same jokes two hours ago to a much better response, pretty sure I delivered it the same way both times

3m01s There are people in the crowd after all

3m40s That’s my friend with the suggestions

4m17s I missed part of the sentence. It should be “I’d be in the business of telling jokes for prison cigarettes” but the line doesn’t work anyway

5m33s I fully agree with this statement, If five minutes of material hasn’t worked and it’s a small crowd, I’m just gonna hit on a girl

5m44s My newest pickup line

6m10s This is the first time that each of the three parts of the neuroeconomics  joke actually worked, I think it’s because I got them paying attention by calling out the text messaging

6m47s Instead of “he did graduate from high school” it should be “he did attend high school”

7m08s If the first line doesn’t get a big laugh, I should admit, “I know that’s fucked up” and then do the act out

Overall: 95% of my material didn’t work, but me talking and calling out the crowd on what was occurring worked. The lesson here is to keep working on making my material indistinguishable from me just talking.

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