This is a coffee house open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OnRhK5CauIs
0m12s This is a new opener I’m trying, it needs work
0m53s I love that this guy was in front of my camera for a full minute
1m18s The “please” line isn’t getting huge laughs, I might want to just have the one line intro
2m20s I should pause for an extra two seconds and look up after “I remember being on the plane” so everyone gets it
2m38s I think it’s the jehovah’s witnesses that go door to door, not the mormons…
2m54s The “intolerable” line either gets a big laugh like here, or no laugh. I need to figure out how to make this consistent
2m59s After “intolerant” I need an actual joke
3m16s It’s not true, she didn’t hug the milkman
3m22s Try doing the joke without “and it was great”
3m57s The slight stutter before “pull out” ruined the punch line
4m50s This last joke is getting retired
Overall: I did one old joke where I added a new line that worked well. I also did a lot of new material, with mixed results. I need to keep writing and tightening the material.
