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Performance Critique: May 7a

Friday Open Mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AbGL5ojSeZg

0m27s Try to introduce this character

0m42s Say “crazy” not “murderous rage”

1m32s Commit more to the “blurry blurry dark dark” bit

3m38s After “I haven’t done it in a while” add on “and now I remember why”

Overall: The sand joke and the immigrant excuse joke both need work

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