The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/oc_s7DP4SHM
3m05s Put hand on hip for “thanks” not earlier
4m14s Needs a stronger punch line
5m08s Replace the one room line
5m16s “Eating daily” not funny enough, go back to looking both ways
5m34s Needs a better line then quitting grad school
5m50s Cut or rewrite the America line
7m02s Not sure that “we’re not married” is strong enough
8m37s Say “get on board” more playfully
9m19s Could’ve gone and asked which of those complaints apply
Overall: Started strong and ended strong and worked on a new bit in the middle, that needs more work
