This is the feedback mic I go to on Sundays
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AELy6YCloiM
0m58s I missed doing an act out of what I sounded like
1m15s Alliteration is when you reuse the same sounds
2m23s I didn’t realize that line got a laugh until I just rewatched it
3m44s Explain “when you get out of it” better
3m54s No need for an act out there
Overall: I tried out some new jokes and some of them worked. They all need to be fixed up, but at least there’s potential. New jokes always take me a few weeks to figure out (sometimes longer).
