Performance Critique: May 23a

Going last on a 7PM show for 10-12 people


2m46s Pause for half a second after “don’t believe me?”

6m20s Roll eyes for longer and bring them higher, so it’s more obvious

7m21s Consider cutting the whole “everyone’s dead” part

8m58s Nice job adding one little line about theatre from listening to the show

Overall: Good for a small crowd

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