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Performance Critique: May 19

The 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/Q6Fpu9zTnBo

1m21s Try being more shocked by how he looks

3m12s Film studies isn’t a punch line

4m10s Smile a little more on the shoes line

4m59s Need a better end line than complain from your yacht

5m26s It was actually okay, I didn’t need to acknowledge the weaker end as it didn’t totally miss

6m33s If the audience member disagrees about being in the same cycle, don’t force the cycles in sync line

7m56s Do the “yeah right” look for longer

8m15s Should’ve improvised off of her not wanting to date me instead of forcing the material, I was trying to close my set

8m44s Decent acknowledgement of what she previously said at the end of the bit

Overall: Good set where my new joke did the best it’s done to date.

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