At a bar show I co-produce
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7kW9j6RVS5o
0m07s I asked to be introduced like that because it was a bunch of poets in the crowd
0m57s When it’s a 3-4 people as the crowd, you need to talk to them before doing jokes
1m54s Change “your” to “our” to keep them on my side
3m27s Acknowledge the phone sooner
3m55s Act out her saying “a full house of umbrella drinks”
4m25s This should go before the poker table
6m50s That’s a good line
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FDYR8udYwLs
0m44s I need a different line instead of “I’m in the market for a new mom”
4m36s That’s bad, cut it or get a different answer
Overall: Considering it was a four person audience, the vacation photos joke went over really well, I need to keep working on it.
