This is me at the feedback mic.
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ih6ohA3E-ac
0m18s Boring joke, first and last time I tried this
1m04s I need the “she’d totally date you” to come before “fuck the kid with the guitar”
1m35s I won’t be telling this joke again
2m10s I should try “don’t brag about your crimes to girls” as the premise for this joke
2m48s This is an old joke that I tried to rewrite, it didn’t work
2m55s I like the pregnant one liner
3m25s This part still needs work, but there are more punch lines here
Overall: I tried out 3 minutes of new or rewritten jokes. The pregnant joke is good as is, crime for dummies has potential, and the kid with a guitar needs to be tried again. The other three new jokes are being put out to pasture. 1 out of 6 (possibly 2 out of 6) isn’t bad.
