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Performance Critique: March 22b

A 10pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N-y_fJDCp58

0m29s There’s a window to the outside world and someone waved at me so I went with it

1m00s That’s an improvised line that should become a regular line

2m23s Don’t acknowledge lack of response on that line, it’s not supposed to get a laugh

2m51s Don’t admit to dumbing down jokes, especially when I am

2m59s Pause longer after “tragedy”

4m55s Don’t step on laughs

5m06s No need for that line

6m05s Change my hand motion for the friend act out

7m44s Picture everyone for an extra second

8m18s The line makes much more sense after a crazy voice joke

8m50s Cut the trunk and last night lines

Overall: The actual material was a little up and down at times, but I did a great job of being in the moment and calling things out that were happening in the room.

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