At an open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rsSR4rlVTr4
0m39s Change to “I also laughed”
1m02s Sell the misdirection better
2m14s If I lean back, I need to say something in a normal voice before leaning forward again
3m50s End the joke on “I was gonna make it a surprise”
Overall: Decent mic response. Trying out new material.