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Performance Critique: March 19b

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=16_BYFv0p48

0m34s Try pausing after “I also laughed”

7m28s Say “broke” instead of “impoverished”

Overall: Solid set. The mom not scared joke needs a little work but has lots of potential.

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