An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VAMdCV1j8XQ
1m51s Nice to get applause breaks at a mic
2m10s It should be “chiseling” not “carving”
2m52s Make it a statement, not a question
3m35s Cut or fully rework that last joke
4m39s Might make sense to change voices in the middle of this
Overall: The old joke went over really well, the new jokes need work