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Performance Critique: March 11a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VAMdCV1j8XQ

1m51s Nice to get applause breaks at a mic

2m10s It should be “chiseling” not “carving”

2m52s Make it a statement, not a question

3m35s Cut or fully rework that last joke

4m39s Might make sense to change voices in the middle of this

Overall: The old joke went over really well, the new jokes need work

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