A Saturday afternoon mic
0m24s No need to acknowledge “it took you a second”
1m28s Cut the third part “and crying into the pillow she used to sleep on”
2m15s Don’t pause after “Yuri”
3m40s Do a clearer knock
3m55s Stumbling over words, this is what happens when you change too much stuff at once
5m05s It seems awkward to change voices in mid sentence
Overall: It was average open mic amount of laughs. I’m practicing the new version of my “good” jokes at the open mics so I don’t stumble on words during a show. Some of the lines still need to be adjusted and cut, but that’s normal for whenever new stuff is added.A Saturday afternoon mic
A Saturday afternoon mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7hqrOXAC27w
0m24s No need to acknowledge “it took you a second”
1m28s Cut the third part “and crying into the pillow she used to sleep on”
2m15s Don’t pause after “Yuri”
3m40s Do a clearer knock
3m55s Stumbling over words, this is what happens when you change too much stuff at once
5m05s It seems awkward to change voices in mid sentence
Overall: It was average open mic amount of laughs. I’m practicing the new version of my “good” jokes at the open mics so I don’t stumble on words during a show. Some of the lines still need to be adjusted and cut, but that’s normal for whenever new stuff is added.
