The Friday night show at which I’m auditioning for the club owner
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cf8VTtqO8o0
1m00s Change “Ilya couldn’t be happier” to something funny
1m45s Get rid of the “crying into a pillow”
2m52s I might need to be less specific and just change it to “hire a hitman”
3m10s Pause longer between each part of my mom’s talking
3m48s Applause breaks during auditions are always nice
4m23s Do a quick knocking sound into the mic first
4m33s Change “power of exfoliating” to something funny
Overall: This went great and is the first set where how I remember it going when getting off stage is the same as how it looks on tape. I got laughs everywhere but in the “Ilya couldn’t be happier” and “power of exfoliation” lines which I will be removing.
