The Sunday writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oaCnDL2el9E
0m23s I tried changing what part comes first, I don’t think it works
0m38s I like changing the voice from man to woman in the middle of the sentence
1m33s I can say this in less words
2m10s I need to make this into an actual story, not a one liner
2m35s I like the affirmative action joke, I need to reword it though
3m23s Instead of “special” say “important”
3m54s Put a joke there
4m32s The concept is funny but I need to remember the actual lines
5m04s The word “morgue” should be last
Overall: I did a lot of new jokes, and they all need a lot of work. Changing the voice of the person mid sentence during the shoes commercial seems funny. I just need to make the differences in the two characters bigger, add some physicality to it.
