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Performance Critique: June 29a

Headlining my Queens bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HtqN9mqqxVg

1m06s Start shaking hands before starting to talk

2m16s Good improvised line

3m34s Change meth to crack

5m54s I need better examples

6m03s Good callback to the improvised waterfalls line

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vOKFwCH25tg

0m35s I love that the jokes are hit or miss but the crowd work is on

2m23s I forgot to say “about me making money”

3m03s Rephrase “glamour gods wanna know”

3m55s Good callback

4m15s If only my jokes went over as well as this stuff

8m34s That’s messed up but funny

Overall: Good job interacting with the crowd and making lots of callbacks to organic things that happened during the set.

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