Performance Critique: June 25a

The Friday 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H-1pn_E8kK0

2m38s Add “cause” before “Jesus would’ve wanted”

3m21s Get rid of “for son”

3m42s My mom’s dialogue here could be funnier

5m27s The checks are a dropping

6m54s Good job getting a laugh before getting off stage

Overall: Solid first 5 minutes then the checks dropped but I still went out on a laugh. The Jewel joke needs to be tighter.

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