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Performance Critique: June 17a

MCing the 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XVwzogFJkt8

0m38s Don’t do that sound effect, maybe the effect of air deflating

1m41s Good improvised line

2m13s Nice segue into my next joke

2m45s Sell my confusion a little harder

3m44s This line could’ve been funnier

4m27s Nice accidental rhyme

4m32s This flows really well after the psychic thing

5m46s I missed a part of the joke, but went back to it later

6m59s Nice improvised answer

8m59s It’d be stronger to say “as long as it’s the only time you spit” instead of “thing you spit”

9m43s Hit “somebody went to Yale” harder and more sarcastically

10m14s After “trying to avoid it” add “now I actually want to know”

Overall: Great job MCing. I had good energy and good crowd interactions. There’s still lots of room for improvement though.

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