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Performance Critique: June 12c

This is the midnight show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yRje032PFpw

1m11s The mic is a little loud, I should’ve adjusted better

1m48s I like how I spent 10 seconds trying to get a better look at a woman’s breasts in the back

2m52s I don’t do this joke that often anymore, it’s good to know it still gets a laugh

3m02s No need to interrupt myself here with the “stand up comic, not a stand up guy”

4m15s The checks are starting to get dropped

4m42s Deliver each word slower

5m19s I pointed to older people for the yearbook reference

6m22s Get into the joke while still looking at the people I asked about their first date, it’ll make it more conversational

7m32s Pause and look at the crowd for a few seconds before saying it

9m34s It’s never good when I have to go into more than one “if you don’t laugh” joke

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ffjpVZx7fYU

Overall: I did well until all the checks were dropped, then I just focused on the few people who were actually listening instead of paying their bill. One day I’ll be funny enough were nobody bothers to look at their checks until I’m off the stage.

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