Performance Critique: July 2c

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-6XmLO90UsQ

0m12s The guy before me ended his set by stripping to his boxers, so I addressed it

1m50s Say “the left side of the room in this case,” it’s less words

2m15s Say that line way slower

3m13s “Glamour god bible” is awkward sounding

6m28s It took way too long and not enough laughs to get to this laugh

Overall: Decent but the Jewel bit needs to be tighter and funnier.

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