A check spot on the 10pm
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LrCNTTtN0xA
0m44s Slightly weird pointing forward motion
2m41s Find a better way for this line
3m38s Go softer on “I’m kidding”
3m55s Shift tone between the first and second half of the sentence more
4m08s I reversed the order of the war profiteering and the neuro, thereby running the neuro war profiteering line
5m34s Don’t acknowledge the bills in that way
5m50s Go even sadder on the delivery
7m25s I could mess with him more for lack of originality
Overall: Average to mediocre check spot
