Performance Critique: July 29b

A check spot on the 10pm


0m44s Slightly weird pointing forward motion

2m41s Find a better way for this line

3m38s Go softer on “I’m kidding”

3m55s Shift tone between the first and second half of the sentence more

4m08s I reversed the order of the war profiteering and the neuro, thereby running the neuro war profiteering line

5m34s Don’t acknowledge the bills in that way

5m50s Go even sadder on the delivery

7m25s I could mess with him more for lack of originality

Overall: Average to mediocre check spot

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