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Performance Critique: July 28c

Late night music and comedy, with a birthday party group chatting in the back

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bY6ulHgIvhA

0m38s Good riff to start

1m11s Emphasize “I’m” in that sentence

1m21s Emphasize “your”

5m15s Work on the wording for that

7m12s I should try a little more to control the talking

8m14s Nice delivery on that line

9m05s Don’t need that last line

Overall: Eh. I was so focused on working out my new stuff that I didn’t put in as much effort into controlling the crowd as I should’ve.

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