Performance Critique: July 23b

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGydzzUF3qc

0m32s More examples needed

1m59s I actually don’t like it

4m13s Don’t swivel side to side like that

5m55s These are all B laughs in a very strong set (up to this point), so this joke should be cut or fixed

8m31s Sound crazier on the act out

Part 2 – which I forgot to color correct

1m03s Try doing Yelp before Netflix and combine both into one joke/concept

2m56s I look very relaxed for having no idea what joke I’m gonna do next

3m30s Point before saying “this clip”

Overall: Extremely solid 14 minute set. Some jokesdidn’t hit as hard as others but I kept the audience with me the whole time.