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Performance Critique: July 22a

The worst mic in the city

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-O2IZ8FgbJM
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-O2IZ8FgbJM

1m16s Neurocomedy as a punch line doesn’t fix the joke

2m34s Don’t put the emphasis on “kinda” put it on “cool”

3m50s Cut the last part of this joke starting from “comedian is where I fit in”

4m45s For the NYTimes try “cause I used to be a junkie and all I did was read”

5m42s I could’ve thrown in, “I’m gonna put my foot up your neuro ass”

Overall: This isn’t the worst this mic has gone

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