Doing a check spot
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TP9vavpWVO4
0m04s I don’t like when an MC says “he’s new on the scene”
1m22s The first two tubes lines didn’t have a pause at the end
2m11s I need to change my voice tonality for “Igor likes this”
2m44s It would work better to say “I can see you guys got a little uncomfortable… because that usually gets an applause break”
2m58s Instead of “you might know” I should say “you look like you know”
3m56s Instead of asking “was that too far” I should admit “you’re right, that was too far”
4m32s True story, the girl it happened with knows I do this joke
5m04s More emphasis on the word “whole”
6m07s This improv-ed line is a keeper “there’s nervous laughter back there, like, ‘shit I should cancel my account’”
7m33s I thought I had stopped doing the thesaurus line three weeks ago, it needs to stop
Overall: Not terrible for a check spot and I came up with an off-the-cuff line that I’ll re-use. Also, the PEZ characters line is new and needs work, and the thesaurus joke should’ve been dropped long ago.
