An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mM0WqSZpD5Y
0m40s It should be “Hey Jenny” not “hey”
1m30s Decent improvised lines
1m51s Try the line as “married people know what I mean”
3m03s Cut this line
4m51s It should be “Enjoy YOUR ride” not “the ride”
5m07s I missed the word “online” before survey
Overall: Keep rewriting the material.
