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Performance Critique: January 2

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IlPMixXrInI

2m53s Cut the agent line

3m17s Get to “castrate them” quicker

4m23s Change this set up to, “It seems that there’s more gay people now then there ever were. I think guys just…”

6m10s Change “like” to “are into”

6m26s No need for the grandpa line

Overall: Still reworking old jokes with new tags. They’re getting tighter but still need more rewriting.

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