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Performance Critique: January 21b

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ZktTKy3A_o

0m14s Might not need to acknowledge this

0m51s More emphasis on “someone”

4m49s Good to pick one or two specific people for the batteries line

6m01s Good improvised response and good idea to ask about how long someone’s been married to go back into the bit

7m13s Say someone instead of something

7m51s I forgot a couple of lines about “if you’re lucky, life, you have a couple good orgasms then you die… Have I depressed everyone yet?” but it still sorta made sense

9m25s Harsher on “maybe”

14m03s Hit the UofP harder, like “I guess you went to…”

15m10s Smile on “basement”

15m55s Spin the media should be after bribe the jury

18m10s Weird fun interaction

18m28s Fun Q&A I guess

19m04s Compromise should go before flexible

19m27s Saying “alright” is a funny way to go into safe word

20m31s Try to have my eyes open wider when doing the grandpa character to differentiate it from the mom

21m17s Hold the smile after each line until the laughs die down, otherwise I might be stopping the laughs cause they’re waiting for the next line

21m58s I can cut the candle part

22m46s Hold for an extra half second

Overall: Great long set. I was relaxed and had fun and the material flowed.

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