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Performance Critique: January 13a

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eLZkoQ7lrlM

0m19s The comedy police would ask “have you been doing punch lines today?”

1m19s Cut the labor markets line

2m27s Reword to “all you do is funny business”

4m10s Cut the politician part

Overall: Working out rewritten jokes.

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